Kia Ora Bloggers For our literacy this term we were working on persuasive writing but today we decide to have a change and we did a poem which was quite fun to do because we got to create our own but the twist of the poem is that it is something naughty we have done in our life. I chose to do How I ate all the chocolate at home I hope my parents really don't read this. Have you done something naughty?
Hi Sree,
ReplyDeleteI have seen some more work of yours. That poem sounds really good, I agree chocolates are really tasty, sugary and yummy. My Christmas chocolate i kept in my room I kept eating it every now and again but I got caught and it is now all in the pantry. Just a tip, maybe next time right a little about what you have done before pasting the picture. Overall it is great.
Yours sincerly
Sophie
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