For literacy we were doing persuasive writing I chose a topic that was not really appropriate for school because it was about tech and that is not really appropriate. I think that I had some strong points and I convinced a lot of people. My work is still in progress because we just started a few days ago. If you have any feedback please comment down below? If you have a convincing persuasive comment write it down below.
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 30, 2019
My Techie Tale!
For literacy we were doing persuasive writing I chose a topic that was not really appropriate for school because it was about tech and that is not really appropriate. I think that I had some strong points and I convinced a lot of people. My work is still in progress because we just started a few days ago. If you have any feedback please comment down below? If you have a convincing persuasive comment write it down below.
Wednesday, August 28, 2019
Cool Canva Thankfulness
for Cyber smart we were doing a Canva on what we are thankful for. I did Soccer as my first one because I pretty much play it every single Day. I did McDonalds because it is my most favourite takeaway Because The food is so good. I did a puppy because I love my dog. I did 4 people because that is my family and My family are my everything. I think that I had good choices And I was smart with what I Picked. If you have any feedback please comment down below.
Friday, August 23, 2019
SN Mind blowing Pepeha
For Te Reo we were Learning how to make a Pepeha A Pepeha is Something that Shows about you and your family and your history. I think that I did my best with my fonts and how it is presented.
If you have any feedback please comment down below. If you have ever learned your family please comment down below
Friday, August 9, 2019
Maths Geometry Work
For Maths we were working on geometry and making cities out of geometry. I think that I did really well even though I am Nowhere near to finishing it because there is a lot of work. If you have any feedback for me to make it better please comment down below?If you have used shapes and geometry before please comment down below.
The Scary Haunted Forest
For literacy I finished all my work so I got to go to Free choice writing. It was fun to start because I think I had a really good idea I think that My start is pretty good This writing is work in progress because I only had some time. If you have any feedback please comment down below? Also if you have ever had a haunted experience please comment down below.
Good Gender Equality
For SOL we were doing gender Equality and how it is unfair if one gender is treated better.I think that I did well and I did my best with the information.If you have any feedback please comment down below.If you have ever thought about gender equality comment down below.
Friday, August 2, 2019
Acid Rain Information Report
For Literacy we were doing Informaton report and how they are set out.My DLO was a doc because it was super quick and easy.I think that I did really well with acid rain.If you have done an information report tell me.If you have any feedback please comment down below.
Inside Lunch Problems
For Literacy we were doing persuasive writing about something that we thought should be aloud to do.My DLO was a doc because it was easy.I think that I did really well.If you have a persuasive you want to share do it down below.If you have any Feedback comment down below.
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